Sunday, September 14, 2008

CLASS= OrangeThe two video games I have are; The Lost Spartan and Spongebob.
Thesis: Human violence has evolved from simple entertainment to mass culture, ranging from adults to even children.
Outline: Introductory: Explain and described the evolution of violence in culture to present day.
Topic 1: State the thesis. Explain how the entertainment industry has altered violence into different forms, and how it relates world-wide.
Topic 2: Bring in the discussion of the two videogames, and show the age difference of the games, and how that correlates to mass culture.
Topic 3: Further discuss mass culture and how it effects and sterotypes thing and the future.
NOTE: Other topic will be added once I think of them.
Conclusion...Restate the thesis.

3 comments:

Gina said...

I think your thesis is really making a strong statement. It is good and the way your paper is going it seems like you are going to prove a good point.

Vetolle said...
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Vetolle said...

Sorry I posted the wrong comment to your blog.
Your thesis is strong,but the support your presenting for the paper seem very vague and cover a wide area of support. Are you going to narrow the supports down to a few central things or are you going to leave it broad?